May 11 2015, 08:03 PM
So, the plot idea here shall be a thing! I'll need some volunteers for a few plot devicies but please keep in mind that it'll take at least half a cycle for him to be developed with his companion. Afterwards it might take him another cycle to fully transition from depressed to bitter and wanting to form a group.
So what I'll need for the plot is someone to make a companion for Vazi here that will die, a carnivore that kills and eats his companion (willingly or accidentally, doesn't matter), friends (herbivore & carnivore before his friend is killed, herbivore after the killing), those willing to join his group after he decides to take a stand against Carnivores, enemies after he goes through his change because he'll make plenty of those.
I've also thought of an idea wher eVazi enslaves baby gembounds that have just hatched. Not the herbivores just the carnivores. He would take them and raise them to think that they're inferior. He's also not above taking prisoners of war.
The whole gyst of it is Vazi goes insane, tries to subdue all the carnivores and makes an army in the process of trying to reach this goal. However, there are those that oppose him and try to protect the carnivores and reach equality for both types of animals. In the end a war or battle breaks out and Vazi is killed by Arkrael but is reborn and hopefully has a better life.
Volunteers:
Vazi's Friend- Shaf
Friend Killer- Giada
Leader of Opposing Group- Arkrael
Those for his ideals: Gracie
Those against his ideals: Tamreael, Arkrael, Usui
So what I'll need for the plot is someone to make a companion for Vazi here that will die, a carnivore that kills and eats his companion (willingly or accidentally, doesn't matter), friends (herbivore & carnivore before his friend is killed, herbivore after the killing), those willing to join his group after he decides to take a stand against Carnivores, enemies after he goes through his change because he'll make plenty of those.
I've also thought of an idea wher eVazi enslaves baby gembounds that have just hatched. Not the herbivores just the carnivores. He would take them and raise them to think that they're inferior. He's also not above taking prisoners of war.
The whole gyst of it is Vazi goes insane, tries to subdue all the carnivores and makes an army in the process of trying to reach this goal. However, there are those that oppose him and try to protect the carnivores and reach equality for both types of animals. In the end a war or battle breaks out and Vazi is killed by Arkrael but is reborn and hopefully has a better life.
Volunteers:
Vazi's Friend- Shaf
Friend Killer- Giada
Leader of Opposing Group- Arkrael
Those for his ideals: Gracie
Those against his ideals: Tamreael, Arkrael, Usui