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First Light (Completed) - Gratia - Oct 02 2016 Everything was dark and calm, there was nothing, she was nothing, then she could feel...... she could feel everything, she could feel herself being trapped inside.... something, she could feel herself wanting to be free, an ancient desire or something telling her that she NEEDED to be free. She started to shake with all the strength her weak little body had, using her paws and head to try to crack the thing that was keeping her trapped open, after a few minutes of struggle, the thing finally broke making the little critter fall to the ground with a loud thud, she remained silent for some seconds, without moving, she was tired, confused and scared, then she blinked and tried to look around, but everything she saw was blurry shiny lights around and darkness, she tried to look at herself with the same luck, what the mammal could see was only a brown shadow where her paws should be, then she started to think.... and wonder, where was she? Why was she here? Why did she knew all the things she knew? but more importantly What was she? She panted slowly while trying to stand, something inside of her knew that she needed to stand and how to do it, but was she doing it right? could her body do it? After trying, she successfully stood, her body was right, she did it at her first try, when she was finally on her paws she tried to call anyone close without using words, producing a weird chirping noise that echoed in the main area of Orion. "Speech looks like this." Thoughts look like this. tags: None notes: 220+ words coding by wulf for template purposes
RE: First Light. - Xireidi - Oct 04 2016
Tags: @Gratia RE: First Light. - Gratia - Oct 04 2016 After a while of silence, she listened to a new sound that wasn't made by her, she remained silent and tilted her head in that direction, noticing a big creature with a red color and sharp teeth, It may be dangerous she thought to herself, but the creature never made an aggressive movement, so the little Patagonian cavy just stared at it confused and with interest, then he talked, he made two... questions? Gembound... when he said that word, she knew the answer, Yes! she was one of those Gembound things. She started to think for some minutes, trying to know how to answer to the sounds the red critter just did "Ye" she said moving the mouth like the big creature, trying to talk normally but the only thing she could really do was talk like a baby, something that wasn't a surprise since she WAS one, "Wat?" She asked turning around, what she just said surely didn't make much sense, but she knew nothing about this world, where she was and what she should do from now on, she kinda knew who she was..... since she heard Gembound, the word Gratia, had been echoing in the back of her head, then she was Gratia, that's who She was..... But, now that she thinks about it, who was the creature in front of him? She turned at him and tilted her head "Whu?" .... She had so many questions, so many. "Speech looks like this." Thoughts look like this. tags: @Xireidi notes: 220+ coding by wulf for template purposes
RE: First Light. - Xireidi - Oct 04 2016
Tags: @Gratia ((Looks like you may have missed the space after the tag, apparently code doesn't quite function without it)) RE: First Light. - Gratia - Oct 04 2016 Gratia followed the critter with her eyes, moving her head to the side slightly to have a better view due to her eyes being at the sides of her head "Xideidi!" She exclaimed proud of herself, repeating what the critter said 'perfectly', when he asked about her own name, which she already knew the Patagonian cavy started muttering nonsense, trying to practice before saying it out aloud "Ga... Gratia" she said with confidence, was that how it was said? Well, it felt like it. After saying her own name, she turned up and saw the shiny things in the ceiling, they where pretty, she didn't knew what they where but she couldn't reach them to know or find out, so her attention turned back to her 'companion' she walked towards the red canine slowly and watching her steps then started to smell him, somehow it felt like something important to do, after some seconds of sniffing and when she finally learned his smell she felt something weird in her belly, then it made a funny sound, it didn't felt well, she looked at Xireidi confused, was the sound good or bad? She only knew she wanted to much at something, to 'taste' something. "Speech looks like this." Thoughts look like this. tags: @Xireidi notes: 166+ coding by wulf for template purposes
(I feel so weird writing this way lols XD and sorry for the tag mistake) 'Sniff' 'sniff' RE: First Light. - Xireidi - Oct 04 2016
Tags: @Gratia RE: First Light. - Gratia - Oct 05 2016 Food? So that's what she needed, food, everything was fun till he said he would leave, she didn't wanted him to leave, they where having so much fun! She also didn't felt tired at all, she felt wonderful and glad to be alive and in theory she woke up some minutes ago, when the canine started to walk away, the little Patagonian Cavy started to follow it around looking at everything available in her view, but almost everything she was able to see where black or rocks, the only difference was when she looked up at the ceiling. After following the red canine for a while, she could smell something sweet and 'good', she didn't knew what kind of good, but it was a good smell, something she knew she desired and that was probably good for her... could it be that food thingy close? however, her nose might and is probably wrong, the expert here was Xireidi and she surely knew what was best for her. "Speech looks like this." Thoughts look like this. tags: @Xireidi notes: 152+ Also, since you barely successfully found Gratia's food, she is being able to smell it from the distance, just telling in case this causes a confusion and i hope this is alright XD coding by wulf for template purposes
(I feel so weird writing this way lols XD and sorry for the tag mistake) 'Sniff' 'sniff' RE: First Light. - Xireidi - Oct 05 2016
Tags: @Gratia RE: First Light. - Gratia - Oct 07 2016 A Monster... was a monster here? was it bad? Could Xireidi defeat it? The idea of a monster made her uneasy and worried, she didn't totally understood the word but something inside told her that it meant BAD and she should avoid it one way or another, when they finally arrived she felt rather exited, Green! she was seeing green, that color for some reason made her feel happy. Then he talked again, telling Gratia that he may be slightly far but wouldn't leave, she nodded even if he wasn't looking at her and stared at him while he jumped, will she ever be able to do something like that? but the brown creature was also suspicious, why did he jump if the food was right in front of them? she walked closer to the berry bush slowly, the sweet smell came from one of these and for her, it smelled like food, so did the leaves in the bush, after thinking for a while she opened her mouth and took a berry, it was juicy and had a delicious taste, well it was the first thing Gratia ate in her life and for her it was the best she could ever get "Xideidi!" she called, she found the food and wanted to share it with him, she turned up excited to look at him, but where she was a rock was slightly covering her view, the patagonian cavy was only able to see the tip of his ears, but even that little made her feel safe. "Speech looks like this." Thoughts look like this. tags: @Xireidi notes: 264 words coding by wulf for template purposes
RE: First Light. - Xireidi - Oct 07 2016
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