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Catarina - Catarina - Mar 18 2018
OOC Name: Swan
Character: Catarina Villa Real
Other Characters: Peggy
Element: Fire
Stone: Pink Zoisite
Stone Location: Heart
Species: Albino Ball Python
Beginning Spell: Char
RE: Catarina - Kin-Kin - Mar 20 2018
@Catarina
So sorry about the delay! Just waiting to confirm a few things!
In the meantime, sadly we’re gonna have to ask you to change the lacy markings on her forelegs slightly since these are too precise to be considered natural. I’m sorry about that! perhaps change them to stripes or cub-spotting, since adult lions have been known to keep their cub spotting into adulthood. In short- lace is mostly good, just needs to appear a little more natural :)
Also, if her mane is as pictured, we need you to change that as well as that, too, would be unnatural for a lion. However, rather than it keeping entirely to her head, might I suggest it being a shorter length overall but continues down her spine, with shorter hairs around the neck and chest like the ruffs occasionally found on tsavo lions? It’d keep to your general idea for her appearance but would be more realistic than such wonderfully flowing locks. Otherwise, you could give her a full mane!
RE: Catarina - Catarina - Mar 29 2018
@Envy I hope you don't mind I gave her a whole makeover, oops. But at least, I think she's more realistic now.
RE: Catarina - Livius - Mar 30 2018
That's totally fine! aaa I love her, she looks so sweet ;;
I just noticed there's one instance in her personality in which you still refer to her as a lioness! make sure you change that ;)
@Catarina
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