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The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Livius - Jun 23 2018 So, with the plot to Mutate Envy starting to roll, I decided to start working on the descriptions and art for the Sinful Seven. I've written out a general base, but I'd love some feedback, and especially some character descriptions for those that need work! also, if you want your character to fulfil a different role in the group, let me know! I'll add you in. I tried to go for a somewhat humorous tone in the description! Let me know if it works or doesn't. It can easily be changed. ![]() ![]() The Sinful Seven is less of a properly organized group and more of a ragtag rabble of vaguely-acquainted Gembounds who've somehow bonded over a more-or-less common goal. In theory, each member has been chosen for their individual strengths and willpower as an elite team capable of taking over the caves. The group is based, and its members named after, the concept of the seven deadly sins; envy, wrath, lust, sloth, gluttony, greed and pride. However, as unsavoury as their namesake, this disorganized bunch are unlikely to ever accomplish anything truly evil and only a couple of the sins actually have villainous tendencies. That being said, if you ever require a mercenary of mischief or a good time with no holds barred, this just might be the group for you! (King) Envy - the de-facto leader of the group, Envy fills the void of envy and insecurity in their heart by stuffing it with fancy titles and magic (that they've actually just stolen from other Gembounds, of course). They still secretly feel inferior to all the others in their group, but have somehow proved that if you yell loud enough, someone will take you seriously. Pride- acts as Envy's main advisor, giving advice when and where it's needed. Reseda (Greed) was the original founder of the group, and the one responsible for bringing all the sins together in the first place. Whilst her original goal was to bring Gembounds together to eventually take over the caves, it's unclear what she thinks she can accomplish with this rowdy lot. Gluttony- head chef and food connoisseur. Sloth- centre of gossip. Lust- group cheerleader. It's somehow impossible not to like lust, so she sticks around with the Seven as she secretly worships their every move. Just don't tell Envy she's been making doll eyes at the other sins, eh? They're the jealous type... Wrath- angry noodle. @Pride @Wrath @Lust @Gluttony @Reseda @Sloth RE: The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Pride - Jun 23 2018 It looks good to me! I'd put something in there about our actual purpose, which might just be "sticking together and seeing what we can do" because I don't even know lmao. I do see a typo with "were" instead of "where" but that's--just a typo :P RE: The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Lust - Jun 23 2018 Love that picture! I'm not sure exactly what Lust's role would be other than innocent cinnamon roll at the moment and group cheerleader. XD (Oh my gosh, I should draw that!) As for the others, Lust is starting to think of them in medieval-ish terms. They think of Envy as King. Reseda has become Lady Reseda to them, a proud knight like character. They themselves as a squire to her. Then we could have lords/ladies, dukes/duchesses, etc if we wanted. As Pride is an advisor, maybe their role would be as Bishop, but without the religious part, lol. RE: The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Livius - Jun 24 2018 @Pride Which line is that on? I can't seem to find it! Thanks for the note though! also updated the things you noted on the picture! @Lust I added a bit more description to lust, made it more humorous but let me know if you feel it doesn't properly represent her character! I think it could be fun if we add little tidbits about their relationships in their descriptions. And the medieval thing is an interesting idea! what if the ranks were based on chess pieces? that could be interesting too! RE: The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Pride - Jun 24 2018 Pride- acts as Envy's main advisor, giving advice when and were it's needed. Sorry, it took me ages to find it again lmao. Thanks and awesome!! The chessboard idea is great. Everyone else = pawns ;) RE: The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Lust - Jun 25 2018 Looks good for Lust's entry! Lust would most definitely be a Pawn. XD RE: The Sinful Seven- Plotter & WIP description - Wrath - Jun 26 2018 @Envy Wrath's entry looks good! Later on, when she's older, I'd think of her as some sort of enforcer or fighter, but for right now she's just a lil' danger noodle. Oh, and here's my idea for the most fitting ranks, although their actual ranks IC might be quite a bit different: Envy - King. Leader of the group, an important piece on the board. If Envy were to be captured, the group would be without a leader. Reseda - Queen. The original founder of the group, cunning and dangerous. Pride - Rook. Right hand Gembound, advises and aids Envy, much like a rook aids the king. Sloth (maybe?) - Bishop. The bishop is capable of easily influencing both sides of the board due to its ability to travel a lot of distance in just one turn, so perhaps Sloth's role as the center of gossip could influence other Gembounds? I'm not too sure on this role, but it's just a thought. Wrath - Knight. Definitely a fighter, and as the Knight is the main attacking piece, it's fitting. Lust - Pawn. Moral support and the group cheerleader- doesn't have much influence in the group, but who knows what'll happen with them? Gluttony - I have no idea on this one, perhaps another pawn? |