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On Spirals - Archimedes - Nov 13 2018 He wasn't sure if leaving Cetus had been a good idea. The strange creatures he had met, the dampness and the mist, the darkness--it had been full of both trembling fear of the unknown, and easy hiding places. Every moment the rat had spent crouched in the darkness had likely been one of safety--yet one of horrid fear, uncertain what might emerge from the half-visible strange beyond. This place... this was different. He wasn't sure yet if better, or worse--but different. It was bitter cold, for one thing--he didn't like that--but it was bright, and full of crevices. He could see far, and scurry into hiding. But it might perhaps have been a tad too bright--a little overwhelming for his dark-accustomed eyes. And the constant dripping of water and whistling wind kept his nerves on edge; he was never sure when a sound was truly dangerous, or only atmospheric noise. It kept him on the jump, though not as much as before. He'd found, too, the tang of salt-scent on the air, here. Archimedes now crouched along the ice-slicked wall near the Pisces entrance, perched on a stone in a cluster of similar rocks--a tumble that had fallen some years ago, all relatively small but a climb for such a tiny rodent. Water ran in rivulets down the icy stone, and he'd found by licking the more dry sections of rock that a delightful, salty taste could be had, there. He sat there now, oblivious to all else, one tiny pink paw braced on the cave wall as the rat licked diligently at the salt. RE: On Spirals - Flit - Dec 09 2018
It had been cycles since Flit's wings had finally dried, and he had grown into them now. He was still small, but he found it much easier now to flit and flutter from flower to flower as he drank nectar, and moreover, he rarely needed to land. Eridanus had become his paradise; in Rift's garden he had made his home, weaving himself a nest with small and delicate paws. Day by day he became more adventurous as he became surer of himself, and ventured further and further from home. @Archimedes RE: On Spirals - Archimedes - Dec 09 2018
The rat startled at the sound of a voice, leaping two feet into the air before springing back. He skittered behind a rock, then thrust his head back out, whiskers twitching and eyes wide--would he need to run for his life..? But no, the thing there was smaller than he, and meek--it made him think, in fact, of food. A faint hostility came over him, and in surprise he examined this, but could find no reason for it. The creature seemed... friendly, very colorful, and afraid. Relief washed over him, driving the aggression away. He forgot it in an instant. Here was a creature who spoke! Fear struck next--what if it was just another mimic, another creature speaking words it did not understand? What if it thinks I can't talk, and leaves? Another spike of fear, and he hurried to speak. "I speak! I can speak--are your words... echoes? Do you know what you're saying?" The last speaker he'd met had been another rat, but she was an Echoing Gray and had merely been parroting words back to him--things she didn't understand. The experience, the horror of going from relief at finding another Speaker to terror at the realization that here was an empty vessel sent by a large and unknown monster (the Greater she'd been bound to, though Archimedes did not know this), luring him out--that had been unspeakable, and haunted him still. Was this one different..? Could this one truly understand? @Flit RE: On Spirals - Flit - Dec 09 2018
Flit startled in a similar manner to the stanger- as he sprang away and fled, Flit shot straight upwards, catching himself with his wings, and quickly perched on a higher ledge, looking down with whiskers fluttering. @Archimedes RE: On Spirals - Archimedes - Dec 09 2018 The little rat let out a squeaking twitter of relief, bounding back out again and stretching up as high as his hind legs would let him. Never mind, now, the faint instinct of a rat to kill a mouse--there was, instead, the incredible relief of the realization that he was not alone in the world. Another instinct, perhaps--that of the social being with a fear of being stranded alone--trumped the distant savagery. "Truly?! Oh, oh! I had thought I was alone," he near cried, waving his paws as if trying to be nearer to Flit. Trauma tremored in his tone. "The others, they did not speak! In the Den-Home! And then the one who came--it was terrible--she spoke but she did not know what she was saying and the creature who came behind her was large, and frightening--..." Archimedes broke off, glancing around with wide eyes. When the rat familiar with its Greater master had caused him enough fear--staring at him with silent eyes--he'd fled back into the rat's nest in Cetus. There he'd hid for days, until he was certain that they were well and truly gone; and he'd been near-emaciated by the time he had come out, having eaten only what he'd managed to steal from the nest's hoard. His entire early life had been defined by these moments of fear, and the relief at seeing a new friend--and a bright pink, harmless-looking one, at that--overwhelmed him. He began to chitter in soft, high-pitch tones, perhaps a rat's only analogue to weeping. As if to calm himself he lifted his forepaws, rapidly brushing them through his whiskers, grooming himself frantically for a moment before turning his attention sharply back to Flit--as if afraid they might have vanished. "Where do you live? What can I call you? This place doesn't feel safe," he added, with a furtive, worried glance around. What if the echoers came back? @Flit RE: On Spirals - Flit - Dec 09 2018
The rat's excitement helped to soothe the nervousness that still lingered. As he scampered over to the ledge, Flit leaned further over, and it only took a fe moments more of listening and consideration before he fluttered down to meet him on the ground. The rat towered over him, even as Flit folded colourful moth-wings at his back and sat up, small pink paws folded against his chest. @archimedes RE: On Spirals - Archimedes - Dec 09 2018 The stranger smelled pleasant--bright, somehow, not the rank odor of the other rats. Archimedes found that he appreciated this quite a lot, though he couldn't quite say why. He himself had the distinct odor of a male rat, and found himself wishing that he did not. He listened closely, whiskers twitching, still sitting on his hind legs. The floor was cold, and the less of him that came into contact with it the better. "...What's an Eridanus?" he asked, at length. It sounded like a place, but it wasn't a word that he knew. "I come from a den-home. In a place that is very dark, and full of cold wet air." He paused, thinking. Was Flit saying that Eridanus had hiding-places? That sounded--well, good, to put it simply. "I don't like being in the open." Archimedes dropped down and came closer, glancing around worriedly. He thought about what Flit had said--his name, Flit--and considered. "I--know words that mean "me," but I do not... know if they are my name? Archimedes, and Rat." After a moment's consideration he sat back up again, shivering a little, peering at the tiny fairy-mouse. "Is your home better than this place? Do you know someplace better we can go?" It meant leaving the salt behind, but that was little price to pay for safety. @Flit RE: On Spirals - Flit - Dec 09 2018
@Archimedes RE: On Spirals - Archimedes - Dec 09 2018 That faint twinge of savagery came again, distant and small but bewildering for a moment, at the mention of the word "mouse." Archimedes regarded it the way one might stare in surprise at a snarling dog racing by--equal parts surprise and horror. But he didn't dwell on it overlong, instead pushing it aside and looking to Flit, blinking. Flit was nice; Flit was kind, and could speak, and was helping them. There was no reason to be mean! "Archimedes, then. Please--yes. I would like to see all of the colors, and smell all of the scents, and-..." He hesitated, blinking, though he moved to follow Flit hurriedly. "What is a--nectar?" He broke into a bounding run to keep up, glad to be on the way to someplace new, hopefully away from the cold, and even farther from the silent cruelty of his once-family of rats. @Flit RE: On Spirals - Flit - Dec 09 2018
The little mouse nodded, folding his wings back once again as he waited for the rat to catch up. @Archimedes |