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CYCLE 120Current time: Apr 05 2025, 08:30 AM


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OOC Name: Aurora
Character: Claire
Other Characters: Baneberry, Acheron, Kavish
Element: Animal
Stone: Azure Topaz
Stone Location: Collarbone
Species: Squirrel Monkey
Beginning Spell: Red Sense

 
 
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@Claire

Unfortunately, Claire's appearance section comes to 184 words which is just a little beneath our minimum word count!

Do you think you could perhaps add another sentence or two to bring it to 200? Perhaps this could be done by adding in something about her voice and the way she speaks, or even how she moves?

Thank you!

 
 
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Fixed!

 
 
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ALSO I'm so sorry for not making note of this earlier, but we'll also need more detail on terms of species as squirrel monkeys are quite a large family. The Common Squirrel Monkey has been suggested by Dark on the Discord - however I wasn't sure if you had another kind in mind?

Apologies again, and thank you very much for your patience!

@Claire

 
 
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Alright! I fixed that!

 
 
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Accepted!

Congratulations, your character has been accepted! You are now free to roleplay this character on Origin Cave! Here's a few suggestions to get you started:

Set up a postlog
Start a plotting thread to find some RP partners
— Make an IC thread of your character emerging from their chrysalis for the first time!

 
 



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