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Aug 04 2015, 03:37 PM
(This post was last modified: Aug 04 2015, 03:38 PM by Leon.)
I'll admit im a bit of a lazy writer when it comes to roleplay posts haha. I tend to just write down a steady stream of consciousness. However, as a general rule of writing, i try to convey things from the perspective of my characters as best I can. Don't write from the perspective of the narrator, write from the character. That is to say, when you're writing third person - write what the character would be experiencing at that time.
Never write definitively if you're talking about something that isn't from your character's perspective - don't say "Makyna was happy". Say "Leon could see the smile on Makyna's face and the tone of her voice lit up the room."
I have more tips but i'm at work right now. I'll post more later!
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