Dec 30 2016, 05:10 PM
Eleanor had been having such a wonderful dream. She could not remember what it was about now that she was waking up. All she could remember was the feeling of joy that had permeated throughout. Now, though, there was only darkness before her, but the darkness did not frighten her. Indeed, she felt comforted by it. However, the longer she remained in this new darkness, the more uncomfortable she grew. Her lungs wanted air, and her body wanted freedom — freedom from the lapis lazuli egg that had kept her safe for a cycle as she had grown inside it. Now she was ready to enter the world, though she did not consciously know it.
Her beak, complete with an egg tooth (a small bone-like protuberance used for breaking out of an egg), began tapping gently on the hard stone of the egg, the same blue stone that traveled down her spine. It took a bit of time, but she remained calm and worked through it, tapping a little harder as time went on, until a small crack could be heard. Eyes still closed to protect them from the amniotic fluid she was suspended in, Eleanor could not yet see the weak light coming in through the crack, but she could sense the change behind her eyelids. The darkness was a little less dark now.
Soon, more cracks appeared in the beautiful gold-sprinkled blue stone, and eventually, it fell apart. Eleanor blinked with wide brown eyes, not yet fully comprehending what she was seeing. Her body shivered, now exposed to the relative cold of Cetus (though the Cave was heating up). Her down feathers stuck to her, glued in place by the amniotic fluid that was now oozing down to the muddy ground. She hunched down into the bottom half of her egg, which was still intact, but the fluid inside it was rapidly cooling. She continued to shiver as the sounds of insects and slowly-flowing water filled her ear-openings. Everything smelled of mud and rotting things and water-logged plant-life. And surrounding everything she could see was a thick white fog that cut off her field of view after just ten feet or so. It looked bleak and desolate…
But instead of feeling afraid or sad, Eleanor felt at home, even as she continued to shiver in her baby feathers. This cold, wet, grey world of hers was beautiful, if a little melancholy. But there was something alluring about sadness, something that the duck would understand probably forever. Sadness was a part of life, and there was a distinct kind of sadness in a place like this that filled her soul and made her quiet and pensive in these moments after her birth.
Words: 458 @Chou - no need to match post length, my muse got carried away
Her beak, complete with an egg tooth (a small bone-like protuberance used for breaking out of an egg), began tapping gently on the hard stone of the egg, the same blue stone that traveled down her spine. It took a bit of time, but she remained calm and worked through it, tapping a little harder as time went on, until a small crack could be heard. Eyes still closed to protect them from the amniotic fluid she was suspended in, Eleanor could not yet see the weak light coming in through the crack, but she could sense the change behind her eyelids. The darkness was a little less dark now.
Soon, more cracks appeared in the beautiful gold-sprinkled blue stone, and eventually, it fell apart. Eleanor blinked with wide brown eyes, not yet fully comprehending what she was seeing. Her body shivered, now exposed to the relative cold of Cetus (though the Cave was heating up). Her down feathers stuck to her, glued in place by the amniotic fluid that was now oozing down to the muddy ground. She hunched down into the bottom half of her egg, which was still intact, but the fluid inside it was rapidly cooling. She continued to shiver as the sounds of insects and slowly-flowing water filled her ear-openings. Everything smelled of mud and rotting things and water-logged plant-life. And surrounding everything she could see was a thick white fog that cut off her field of view after just ten feet or so. It looked bleak and desolate…
But instead of feeling afraid or sad, Eleanor felt at home, even as she continued to shiver in her baby feathers. This cold, wet, grey world of hers was beautiful, if a little melancholy. But there was something alluring about sadness, something that the duck would understand probably forever. Sadness was a part of life, and there was a distinct kind of sadness in a place like this that filled her soul and made her quiet and pensive in these moments after her birth.
Words: 458 @Chou - no need to match post length, my muse got carried away